How many things that destroy environment do you do every day? Probably you do destroy environment by doing many things. First you make many trash every day. This is one of the things that you destroy environment. Second you take a shower every day. shapoo and soap are harmful on environment. Third you eat meat because when people raise cow or pig , they make poisonous gas.
People must not destroy environment and must protect environment now. Or there are many abnormal climate and people can't live anymore in earth in the end.
20120952 Jeong - Eun Lee
You did a really great job writing a short title and a hook sentence for your paragraph! Excellent! You also use transition signals, which is good (first, second, third). Just remember to put a comma after first, second, and third. Also, you give good supporting reasons for your causes. This is a great paragraph to develop into an essay.
답글삭제Other tips:
much/a lot of trash (uncountable)
improve title by changing the word forms = Environmental Destruction